GM505 Unit 4 Financial Aid Phone Diagnostic Report Example

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This GM505 Unit 4 report tests a dean's explanation for phone complaints and finds the main cause somewhere else. Purdue Global GM 505, Action Research and Consulting Skills, asks MS in Management students to diagnose before intervening. At a composite community college, the dean blamed rude advisors and asked for a customer service refresher. Coding 610 calls, tracing forty verification files and observing the processing desk shows that 57 percent of calls concern verification documents, that 26 of forty files were incomplete on first submission and that the processor's notes are invisible to advisors. Courtesy is a small factor; an unclear request letter drives the loop.

CourseGM505 Action Research and Consulting Skills
UnitUnit 4
Paper typeDiagnostic report
LengthAbout 1,130 words, 7 pages double-spaced
FormatAPA 7 student paper
SchoolPurdue University Global
ProgramMS in Management
UpdatedOctober 2026

Free sample paper for GM505 Unit 4

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The Letter Behind the Phone Calls: A Unit 4 Diagnostic Report for a College Financial Aid Office

[Student Name]

Purdue University Global

GM505: Action Research and Consulting Skills

Unit 4 Diagnostic Report

[Instructor Name]

[Date]

The college, its staff, its students and every count are composite and illustrative; the methods and studies cited are real.

What this part is doingTesting the sponsor's explanation against three sources of evidence in the lead signals that the report will reach a verdict, not simply describe.
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The Presenting Problem

In her request for this work, the dean wrote: "Students are telling us our advisors are rude and that they can't get through on the phone. I want the office to do a customer service refresher before spring." Thirty-seven complaint emails reached her office during the fall verification period, most of them about long waits and several about advisors' tone.

Three Explanations

Advisor courtesy. Advisors are curt or unhelpful on the phone, which frustrates students and generates complaints.

Volume beyond staffing. Calls during the fall peak exceed what six advisors can answer, so waits are long and frustration spills into the calls that get through.

A process that manufactures calls. Something in the verification workflow makes students call repeatedly, inflating volume and frustration.

The three are not exclusive, and the diagnosis aims to judge how much each contributes.

Methods

Over two weeks in late September, advisors coded 610 calls by their main reason using five categories agreed in advance. I traced forty verification files from the date the request letter was sent to the date the file was complete, recording each upload and each call from the student. And I spent three mornings at the processing desk observing how the senior processor reviewed files. Because I am an advisor in this office, I also kept a journal of my own reactions, which I will draw on in a later reflexivity analysis.

Exhibit 1: Why Students Call

Of the 610 coded calls, 241, about 40 percent, were status questions about requested documents: whether a form had arrived, what was still missing or why aid had not been finalized. Another 104, 17 percent, were questions about how to complete a requested document. Questions about award amounts made up 98 calls, disbursement and refund timing 79, and other reasons 88.

Taken together, 345 calls, 57 percent of all traffic, concerned the verification documents.

Tracing the Files

Of the forty traced files, 26 were incomplete on first submission. The median file needed 2.6 uploads before it was complete and took 19 days from request letter to completed review. Students with incomplete first submissions called a median of three times before their file was complete; students with complete first submissions called a median of once.

The request letter explains why. It lists required items by their federal form names, such as "IRS Tax Return Transcript" and "V1 Verification Worksheet," with no description of what each is or where to get it. Several students uploaded a copy of their tax return instead of the transcript, a common confusion. Research on federal student aid has found that the complexity of aid paperwork deters and delays students, and that help with the forms themselves changes outcomes substantially (Dynarski & Scott-Clayton, 2006; Bettinger et al., 2012).

Observing the Processing Desk

The senior processor reviews files in the order they arrive. When she finds a missing or incorrect item, she sends a standard email to the student. She does not record in the file what was missing, so advisors answering a status call cannot see why the file is on hold. Advisors therefore tell the student they will check and call back, or ask the student to call again, which adds another call.

Exhibit 2: The Loop

The evidence forms a loop. An unclear letter produces incomplete uploads. Incomplete uploads lengthen the review queue, because each file is reviewed more than once. A longer queue generates status calls. Status calls keep advisors on the phones and away from helping students complete their files. And because advisors cannot see why a file is on hold, many status calls end without an answer and produce another call.

The office is not mainly answering students' questions about financial aid; it is answering questions its own letter and its own invisible file notes create.

What this part is doingThe highlighted sentence condenses the loop into the report's central finding, which redirects the dean's attention from courtesy to process.
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Verdicts

Advisor courtesy: partly supported, weak contribution. Of the 610 calls, 14 included a complaint about an advisor's tone. A review of thirty recorded calls found three in which an advisor was noticeably curt, all during the busiest hours. Courtesy is a real but small part of the problem, and it appears to worsen under volume pressure. Strength of evidence: moderate.

Volume beyond staffing: supported, but a consequence more than a cause. Peak-week volume did exceed advisors' capacity, with average holds of 23 minutes. But 57 percent of that volume concerned verification documents, and much of it was repeat calls. Reducing repeat calls would reduce volume without new staff. Strength of evidence: strong.

A process that manufactures calls: strongly supported, main contribution. The call coding, the file tracing and the observation all point to the request letter and the missing file notes as the largest source of calls. Strength of evidence: strong, from three independent sources.

What this part is doingGiving each explanation a verdict and an evidence rating makes the diagnosis usable by a sponsor who must choose where to act.
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What the Diagnosis Suggests

A customer service refresher would address the smallest of the three causes. A clearer letter and visible file notes would address the largest. The diagnosis also points at the dean's live-answer rule as a possible contributor, since keeping all six advisors on the phones during peaks leaves no one to help students complete files, but testing that would require a later phase.

How the Staff Responded

Following the contract, I presented these findings to the office staff before the dean. The advisors recognized the status-call pattern at once; several said they had stopped explaining the letter on the phone because it took too long. The senior processor was surprised by how many calls her missing notes produced and said she had assumed advisors could see her emails to students, which they cannot. The director asked whether the courtesy complaints should simply be dropped. The staff agreed they should not, since three curt calls in thirty is still too many, but that a refresher alone would leave the larger causes in place. Diagnosis in action research is meant to be worked out alongside the staff who must act on it rather than handed down, and this meeting was where the diagnosis became the office's own (Coghlan & Brannick, 2014).

Limits

Two weeks of calls may not represent the whole season. Advisors coded their own calls, which may have shaped how they categorized difficult ones. Forty files is a small sample. And my position as an advisor means I may have been inclined to find a process problem rather than a people problem, which is why the call coding and the file tracing were designed before I looked at the results.

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References

Bettinger, E. P., Long, B. T., Oreopoulos, P., & Sanbonmatsu, L. (2012). The role of application assistance and information in college decisions: Results from the H&R Block FAFSA experiment. The Quarterly Journal of Economics, 127(3), 1205-1242. https://doi.org/10.1093/qje/qjs017

Coghlan, D., & Brannick, T. (2014). Doing action research in your own organization (4th ed.). Sage.

Dynarski, S. M., & Scott-Clayton, J. E. (2006). The cost of complexity in federal student aid: Lessons from optimal tax theory and behavioral economics. National Tax Journal, 59(2), 319-356. https://doi.org/10.17310/ntj.2006.2.07

The Purdue Global GM505 Unit 4 instructions

In GM505's fourth unit you test a presenting problem against competing explanations. Restate the problem in the sponsor's words and set out at least three explanations that could account for it. Describe your methods briefly: what records you used, what sample you traced and what you observed. Present the evidence in exhibits, such as a table of call reasons and a diagram showing how causes feed each other. Give each explanation a verdict and a stated strength of evidence, rather than leaving them in balance. Bring in research that helps explain the mechanism you found. Describe how the people in the system responded to the findings, since in action research diagnosis is shared. Note what the diagnosis suggests for the next phase without designing the intervention. State the limits of your evidence, including your own position. Expect about six pages with two exhibits, citing research in APA 7.

How the GM 505 Unit 4 example is put together

The report quotes the dean's request and the 37 complaint emails. Three explanations follow: courtesy, volume beyond staffing and a process that manufactures calls. Methods cover two weeks of coded calls, forty traced files and three mornings at the desk. Exhibit 1 reports 241 status calls, 104 how-to calls and smaller categories. File tracing shows a median of 2.6 uploads and 19 days, and the letter's federal form names explain the confusion, supported by Dynarski and Scott-Clayton and by Bettinger and colleagues. Observation shows notes missing from files. Exhibit 2 draws the loop, and the highlighted sentence states that the office answers questions it creates. Verdicts rate courtesy as weak, volume as a consequence and the process as the main cause. A section on the staff meeting cites Coghlan and Brannick, and limits close the report.

Where the points sit in the GM505 Unit 4 rubric

The GM505 rubric for this report rewards evidence that can decide between explanations. Instructors check that the presenting problem is stated fairly and that rival explanations get a genuine test rather than a dismissal. Methods should be brief but specific. Exhibits earn credit when they show the pattern clearly, and a loop diagram demonstrates understanding of how causes reinforce one another. Verdicts with explicit strength of evidence are weighted heavily, since a diagnosis that leaves everything possible does not help the sponsor decide. Research that explains the mechanism, here the cost of paperwork complexity, adds depth. Reporting the staff response shows the participatory character of action research. Honest limits complete the report. The paperwork studies by Dynarski and Scott-Clayton and by Bettinger's team, plus Coghlan and Brannick on shared diagnosis, make up the APA 7 references.

Common GM505 Unit 4 mistakes, and how to avoid them

GM505 Unit 4 reports often accept or reject the sponsor's explanation without testing it, or test only the writer's favorite alternative. Others gather data but present it without verdicts, leaving the reader to decide. A common mistake is treating volume as a cause when much of it is produced by the process. Some writers omit how staff reacted, which in action research is part of the diagnosis. Limits are frequently missing, especially the writer's own position as an insider. Restate the problem as given, list at least three explanations, gather records, traced cases and observation, show the results in exhibits, draw how causes feed each other, rule on each explanation with a strength rating, share the findings with the people involved and say what the diagnosis points toward without designing the fix yet.

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GM505 Unit 4 questions, answered

What if the presenting problem turns out to be the real one?

Then the report says so, with the evidence. Testing a stated problem does not require overturning it; sometimes the client was right. What matters is that rival explanations were considered and ruled out on evidence. A report that confirms the presenting problem after a fair test is stronger than one that rejects it to look insightful.

How much data does a diagnostic report need?

Enough to test each explanation, which is often less than people expect. A few weeks of records, a small traced sample and some observation can support a clear verdict when the sources are matched to the questions. Where your section uses a described case, the case materials serve as the evidence and the same test-by-test structure applies.

Should the report include recommendations?

Many sections want diagnosis kept separate from intervention, with recommendations arriving in a later unit. If your instructions ask for both, a short closing section pointing toward options is common, but the diagnosis should stand on its own first. Mixing the two tends to make the evidence look selected to support a remedy already chosen.

Where can I find a free GM505 Unit 4 sample paper?

This page carries a full GM505 Unit 4 diagnostic report testing three explanations for phone complaints in a college financial aid office, with coded calls, traced files, a loop diagram, verdicts and APA 7 references.

Were the advisors rude?

Partly. Fourteen of 610 calls included a complaint about tone, and three of thirty recorded calls showed a curt advisor, all at peak hours. Courtesy was a real but small contributor compared with the document process.